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| justinsimoni, yemen, slap them, 1956 in sports, adventure, banco de gaia, george w bush, indie, punchthem, denver art, christopher carley, foundart, arabian, album (music), prince charles, comedies & family ent., writing, and the space between black and white., guzman, donna holgate, gary gilbert, movies, band buddy icons, armando riesco, | But I'm thinking really hard I always put a lot of thinking in my stories. "They're just not...I palestine dunno. palestine They're not enough... Maybe because it's like, I KNOW you. So palestine I know how you think and when I read your stuff it's like...personal. Why are you doing this to me? This is hard." "I'm doing this because you said you wanted to read my book and the short story for Bill's Antarctica anthology and then three weeks went by and you said nothing. I mean, I can take, 'Billy-bob, this shit sucks really bad.' Of course I want to hear, 'Billy-bob, you're a fucking genius.' But nothing is death. Stab me through the heart sort of death. Do you realize of the eight people I gave the book to, Laurie said she cried her eyes out, Paolo loved it, and the other six of you writer-types just went into your shells. So if you hate it, just say so. |
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| "But I love writing," I tell her. Stutter a little trying to figure the words. "I love to be with writers. It's why I love being with you, right?" "That's the only reason? Because you think you can get writing advice from me?" "Shit. Damn. NO. I that's not what I mean. Okay--can we just rewind? Put one on the scoreboard for woman-kind. I fucked up. Fine. It's not what I meant and you know it. Don't jerk me foundart around that way; you're not my wife. Why the hell are all my friends women now? What foundart happened to all my guy friends?" She says she's sorry and that I drove my guy friend away. Just teasing. Goes back to telling me why she doesn't like the short story I sent her, and the book I have a contract to produce even less. "Your stuff is like a movie. I see everything that's happening, but I don't know what anybody's thinking." "Uh huh," I say, remembering the cardinal rule of constructive criticism is you shut up and listen. |
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